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Namaste...Good Evening...sat shri akaal...assalaam alekum...jai shri krishna..... My dear friends I need your valuable critic,feedback & comments, So please make me more enthusiastic & passionate for writing as I want to write according to my friend's,viewer's choice. It will give me immense pleasure if I get positive response & it will be proved as writing booster for me if I get criticized,praised for my work.I know I am not a good write but if you guys help me I will prove that I am better than the best. I hope you will support & motivate me for the same.All of you have a different taste of reading & if you send me suggestions,your choices I will do my best to make you to quench your thirst of reading your interest oriented articles,poems,parody,sher o shayaris, etc. Therefore,Please make me the word player & writing tycoon. I would love to know your good or bad experience,mistakes in my writing. "Bhatak bhi jaunga to parwaah nahi hai ka

JAB KHUD KE SATH BADSULUKI SAHAN NAHI KAR SAKTE. TOH DUSRO KE SATH KYU? JAB APNA NUKSAAN TUMHE SUKUN SE JINE NAHI DETA. TOH DUSRO KA KYU? JAB KHUD KE SATH HUYE FAREB KO BARDAASHT NAHI KAR PATE.. TOH DUSRO KE SATH KYU? JAB APNI BEHAN,MAA,BETI KE BAARE ME SUNKE TAMTAMAA JATE HO.. TOH DUSRO KI STRIYO KE BARE ME KYU? JAB KHUD APNE GHAR ME UNCHI AAWAZ ME SPEAKER BAJAATE HO.. TOH DUSRO SE TAKLIF KYU? JAB APNO KE SATH SAAZISHEIN KARKE UNHE TADPAATE HO... TOH DUSRO KE KARNE ME BHADAKTE HO KYU? JAB KISI MAJBUR KO SAFAR ME BETHNE KO JAGAH NAHI DETE... TOH DUSRO KE KARNE PE AAPATI KYU? JAB KHUD APNE MAA PITA KA AADAR NAHI KARTE. TOH KHUD KE BETE SE TAKLIF KYU? JAB APNI PATNI/PATI KE ALAWA BHI PARSTRI/PARPURUSH SE SAMBANDH RAKHTE HO.. TOH PATNI/PATI KE KARNE PE AITRAAZ KYU? JAB KHUD KISI KE JAZABAATO SE KHILONO KI TARAH KHELTE HO... TOH KHUD KE SATH HONE ME GILA KYU? JAB BURA KARTE WAQT BHAGWAN KE LIYE NAHI SOCHTE. TOH PAAP KARNE KE BAAD KHUDA SE PRAISHCHIT KYU???

Some guys were going to pilgrimage. I asked them “Hey buddies where are you going.” They replied “We are going to remission as we sinned a lot.” I asked them again “ Do you really think you will become ASIN after worshiping the god.”  All of them replied “Yes”. I was thinking  after there departure what they think about god? Does he forgive all the sinners even after their inhuman deeds? Does he permit them to come in his shelter after destroying other’s shelters? I don’t think so but I have seen &  heard enormous people who committed deadly &  evil deeds but went to all pilgrimages all the temples,churches,mosques,holy rivers for remittal.  The guys who are unable to look after their parents in their old age while their parents made them to stand at the place where they are today. The people who looted,robbed,kidnapped,killed the people, raped innocent girls. It was just for making money & their uncouth &  devil lustful  mind. The people who forfeited o

इज़ाज़त है तुझको फिर ,मुझे तबाह कर जाने की।  आखिर पिछली तबाही का बचा हुआ टुकड़ा ही तो हूँ।  तहस नहस करजा मेरी बची हुई दुनिया को।  अब तो वैसे भी रोया हुआ दुखड़ा ही तो हूँ।  फिर भी है इस बची हुई ज़िन्दगी में तेरी ही आरज़ू।  जी रहा हूँ अब तक रखकर दिल में तेरी जुस्तजू।  करदे तबाह कि आके मेरी दुनिया  मिटा जा ।  इसी बहाने मुझे तेरा दीदार तो करा जा।  सोचूंगा आज रब मुझपे हुआ मेहरबान है।  कि  जान मेरी लेने आई आज मेरी  जान है।  ज़िन्दगी की सब खलिशें मेरी मौत पे ख़त्म हो जाएगीं।  बेवजह जागी हैं जो ,वो सारी ख्वाहिशें सो जायेगी।  फिर नई ख्वाहिशों का ,अरमानों का जनम होगा।  फिर खिलेगा दिल मेरा ,फिर कोई सनम होगा।  बस खुदा उस प्यार को कामयाब तू कर देना।  सारे पुराने घावों को अपनी मेहर से भर देना। 

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